How to Survive High School

How to Survive High School

Lie to yourself. Say, “These
are the best days of my life, trapped
in rancid classrooms.”  Listen

as women three times your age
spoon feed you facts.  Forget them all.
Write yourself rants in a secret

journal, the one with a gold lock
flimsy as your heart. Fling yourself
against nonchalant boys.  Regret those rushed

salacious nights. Attempt coarse language.
Feel the fucks and shits
crowd your mouth like marbles.  Practice

your elocution by repeating empty promises.
Burn your friends’ faces into your memory.
Dream about them, years later.

 

This poem was written in response to this week’s Read Write (Word) Prompt.  The words I used that were part of the prompt were:  rancid, spoon, rant, fling, salacious, coarse, and elocution.  You should head on over to RWP to see what everyone else did.

19 Comments to “How to Survive High School”

  1. I LOVED this piece! It really describes the abysmal heaviness of the teenage years…You reminded me of how happy I am that they are over.

  2. The idea “practice your elocution by repeating empty promises” is a poem of its own. wow.

  3. So…Jessica, did we go together in high school? Sounds very familiar, not that I would be familiar or anything like that, but, there is a hint of knowing. Nice work.
    Donald

  4. An excellent look back to those days.

    You’ll find mine here.

  5. Terrific, especially the last two stanzas.

  6. I don’t know which is sharper, the precision of the language or the accuracy of the description. Either way: splendid!

  7. I love “Feel the fucks and shits
    crowd your mouth like marbles.” Great and true.

    I AM one of those “women three times your age” – so I hope that I do more than spoon feed facts! Ouch…although I know that’s how students feel. Bravo.

  8. This does ring true. I would never be brave enough to use profanities but

    “Attempt coarse language.
    Feel the fucks and shits
    crowd your mouth like marbles.”

    is so apt!!

  9. I like your personal touch.My school years
    could only be described as mediaeval so I can’t really identify with this.Nevertheless I find other experiences very interesting .’Flinging yourself against nonchalant boys’ makes me laugh.

  10. Wonderful! I love the point of view and “gold lock as flimsy as your heart” is fantastic.

  11. There is so much truth, whether from a male or female perspective.

    I have a High School reunion coming up and this brought all the drama llama of that time crashing back.

    Wonderful poem

  12. This is my favourite so far by a long way (perhaps because I can relate) – great work!

  13. I loved the marbles and the journal – very true feeling images

  14. Your poem’s lovely and I especially like how you write about profanities because that is what teens pick up and put in their mouths like marbles. You know the age of innocence is truly past.

  15. A wonderful ode to youth, only if I had read it back when I was in high school :) . This was a great read.

  16. Wonderful look at the intensity and confusion of adolescence. It brought back memories of the compassion I had for my students when I taught high school. I love where the last line takes the poem.

  17. Great title — how could anyone NOT read the poem with a title like that?! I like how the girl is feeling (instead of hearing) the coarse words in her mouth: coarse as a touch sensation. My mother was a high school English teacher; she probably could write her own poem about surviving high school classes!

  18. I love the first sentence and the way it sums up everything that is to follow.

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