NaPoWriMo #13: Poem Starting with a Line from Norman Dubie

Poem Starting with a Line from Norman Dubie

My favorite pastime has become
the imaginary destruction of flowers.
I conjure bouquets -  lilies
or amaranth, tea roses dotted
with sprays of baby breath
like flakes of dandruff – and I see them
exploding in bursts of petals
and flame. As we talk, calmly, I am
linking daisies in chains just to snap
their green stems. I am blowing
dandelions, not to spread their spores,
but to strip them bare. I play
he loves me, he loves me not
in my mind, squeezing the juice
out of the decisions. I will not wait
for them to wither; I have no patience
for the inevitable. I prefer to pull
and tear. Say what you want,
at least I’m good
at breaking everything beautiful.

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13 poems down, 17 poems to go.

(8 on prompt, 5 off prompt).

I am pretty straight forward on this one. I took Sarah J. Sloat’s prompt as literally as possible. She offered us 11 options for first lines, using Norman Dubie’s words. I chose number 5 (from “The Mercy Seat”, I think) and I wrote a poem on the bus ride home.

Yep, that’s pretty much it.

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3 Comments to “NaPoWriMo #13: Poem Starting with a Line from Norman Dubie”

  1. nicely done and thanks for sharing your words

  2. Jessica,
    nice misdirection. You had me going with a pretty straightforward message until the last six lines, where it got brutally honest. Nice writing!
    JDM

  3. I could feel the destruction of the flowers as I read this, and then the last few lines really blew me away!

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