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January 10, 2011

January 10: 9:18 AM

9:18 AM

Outside, I pace my exhalations
so that a curl of condensation winds
between crystalline flurries.

A yellow, extinguished Marlboro butt
discarded on the sidewalk reminds me
of the years I smoked just to keep warm.

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This micropoem is part of A River of Stones International Small Stone Writing Month, hosted by Fiona and Kaspa. The goal of the project is for participants to create one small stone (a recorded moment of mindful observation) each day in January.

January 10, 2011

January 9: 9:40 PM

9:40 PM

Boiling cranberries in maple syrup,
I wait for the skins
to split open, for the berries
to burst and send
a plume of perfumed steam
to fog my glasses.

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This micropoem is part of A River of Stones‘ International Small Stone Writing Month, hosted by Fiona and Kaspa. The goal of the project is for participants to create one small stone (a recorded moment of mindful observation) each day in January.

 

January 10, 2011

Blameless Mouth Poem: Maenads

Maenads

We were good daughters, once.  Bent to the floor,
hand scrubbing your marble tiles,
hunched over the hearth fire, raking
extinguished gray coals.
Never breathing

a hint of complaint, never leaving
the confines of your homes.  Laced inside
our coarse brown dresses
beat hearts of tangled roots, turning leaves
and creeping green vines.

All it took was one touch
from his pine cone tipped wand, one taste
of his bittersweet wine

and we were unleashed, running
through dense, drenched forests,
unraveling our tightly plaited hair.

We finally live without cares,
dancing beneath the wide, watchful moon
to the faint humming tune rushing
in our reedy veins.  We circle
and twirl in one alive, laughing
mass, a tumble
of bare arms, half-drained wine skins
and soft, spotted panther hides.

Fathers, forget us.
We think of you, only in flashes,
after our long days of hunting

as we happen upon the one wandering man
waiting for us to pounce
in one sleek, hungry body,
tasting the honey sweet sorrow
steeped in his warm, vulnerable skin.

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This poem is based on the Greek myth of the Maenads.  Maenads were female followers of Dionysus, the god of wine and theater. They were driven to ecstatic frenzies, often hunting animals and tearing them apart with their bare hands. They are probably most famous for killing Orpheus (after the whole Eurydice thing) by ripping him limb from limb for not honoring Dionysus appropriately. Nice ladies.

I wanted to share this poem because I like the placement in the book. In Blameless Mouth, this poem immediately follows a poem about my time in college, with a group of women friends. While we weren’t tearing animals and people apart, we were engaging in our own small rebellions and testing our new freedoms together. The Maenads would probably be disappointed in our little revelries, but I like associating this time in my life with the myth.

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